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I tried to write a poem, Clara
I've been working on it for a
while
to write how you always
seem to make me smile

I've tried to tell a story
through the medium of rhyme
but every time I start to type
the words fall out of time

it's always been so simple
I can write when I feel wrong
but it all seems so unnatural
now I feel like I belong

I don't think I can do it
Because I don't know where to start
so if I see you in my poems
it will mean you stole my heart.

Your smile means the world to me,
My favorite thing of all to see,
you should know your smiling face,
indeed is, my happy place

 

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il y a une heure, ipiratemedia a dit :

I tried to write a poem, Clara
I've been working on it for a
while
to write how you always
seem to make me smile

I've tried to tell a story
through the medium of rhyme
but every time I start to type
the words fall out of time

it's always been so simple
I can write when I feel wrong
but it all seems so unnatural
now I feel like I belong

I don't think I can do it
Because I don't know where to start
so if I see you in my poems
it will mean you stole my heart.

Your smile means the world to me,
My favorite thing of all to see,
you should know your smiling face,
indeed is, my happy place

Nice poem, @ipiratemedia. Wish I could write such things but my pics speak better than my words 🙂 
Talking about Clara's smile, here's one for you 🙂

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1 hour ago, ipiratemedia said:

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I tried to write a poem, Clara
I've been working on it for a
while
to write how you always
seem to make me smile

I've tried to tell a story
through the medium of rhyme
but every time I start to type
the words fall out of time

it's always been so simple
I can write when I feel wrong
but it all seems so unnatural
now I feel like I belong

I don't think I can do it
Because I don't know where to start
so if I see you in my poems
it will mean you stole my heart.

Your smile means the world to me,
My favorite thing of all to see,
you should know your smiling face,
indeed is, my happy place

beautiful poem, i'm very touched. dh2995 makes awesome photos with me, and you make beautiful poems.
I am very grateful to you.

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2 hours ago, ipiratemedia said:

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I tried to write a poem, Clara
I've been working on it for a
while
to write how you always
seem to make me smile

I've tried to tell a story
through the medium of rhyme
but every time I start to type
the words fall out of time

it's always been so simple
I can write when I feel wrong
but it all seems so unnatural
now I feel like I belong

I don't think I can do it
Because I don't know where to start
so if I see you in my poems
it will mean you stole my heart.

Your smile means the world to me,
My favorite thing of all to see,
you should know your smiling face,
indeed is, my happy place

 

oh,you @ipiratemedia, this isn't a river of beautiful words this more of that .!! this type of poems which you have it shine in the bottom of the ocean like an a jewels,need  to a new Columbus to  looking for them !! you made me a jealous of the meanings that steal the heartbeat in only  words !! and  the lady Clara she is deserve that poem for sure..!!

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There i went..!! 
in the way of the stars .. !!
 Looking for you,
 among the lights ..!
  to you the moon is laughing .. !! 
 you attracted him by your magic ..!
in his lap you are asleep .. !!
  on his love you are woke up .. !!
   you stole the moon from us. !!
 he become absent of us ..
   so sure, you took the moon .. !!
  so don't  try to steal of  us stars .. !!
  You are the Clara,the lady
  at someday she slept in the lap of the moon .. !!
and still she trying to steal the stars ..!!
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2 hours ago, ooopel said:

oh,you @ipiratemedia, this isn't a river of beautiful words this more of that .!! this type of poems which you have it shine in the bottom of the ocean like an a jewels,need  to a new Columbus to  looking for them !! you made me a jealous of the meanings that steal the heartbeat in only  words !! and  the lady Clara she is deserve that poem for sure..!!

Thank you for telling me how much you have enjoyed reading my poem. I’m so pleased to know that it brightens your day. Only someone, with great taste for words like you Ooopel, could make me feel a sense of style in writing poetry. If only the world was full of wonderful things like you and Clara, I might be able to write even more. Joey 01.gif.e75c7aa41b3d4ce68178e0e0f92dea07.gif

 

 

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il y a 59 minutes, ooopel a dit :

There i went..!! 
in the way of the stars .. !!
 Looking for you,
 among the lights ..!
  to you the moon is laughing .. !! 
 you attracted him by your magic ..!
in his lap you are asleep .. !!
  on his love you are woke up .. !!
   you stole the moon from us. !!
 he become absent of us ..
   so sure, you took the moon .. !!
  so don't  try to steal of  us stars .. !!
  You are the Clara,the lady
  at someday she slept in the lap of the moon .. !!
and still she trying to steal the stars ..!!
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Another nice poem @ooopel 🙂
This time, a few of Clara's expressions while listening to her guest, who must be feeling he is the only person that matters at that moment 🙂

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Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-40-178efe9e8bea  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-47-414df8e7d6bb

Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-48-36d94c08c30e  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-50-13e56cf823b1

Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-50-59678c3b3702  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-51-36b5f31dc311

Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-52-087b135a2ba6  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-54-026b1aa8f192

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9 minutes ago, dh2995 said:

Another nice poem @ooopel 🙂
This time, a few of Clara's expressions while listening to her guest, who must be feeling he is the only person that matters at that moment 🙂

Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-38-23c6dd728878  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-39-44f2ccd36ff2

Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-40-178efe9e8bea  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-47-414df8e7d6bb

Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-48-36d94c08c30e  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-50-13e56cf823b1

Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-50-59678c3b3702  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-51-36b5f31dc311

Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-52-087b135a2ba6  Capture-du-2018-11-22-17-54-026b1aa8f192

She looks very pretty in these captures. I like #2, 3, 6 and 7 👌🏻

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